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Edit:I didnt expect this much comment.thanks so much!really appreciated :happycry:

eyvallah.saolun varolun

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:icondiefilthyhumans:
Awesome dude. I wouldn't want the colors any other way they look great.
:iconstrayheadache:
everything looks great, the colors are so warm! i'd only say to up the contrast between the foreground and background, or whatever you want us to focus on because the values all seem similar which makes it kind of flat and melted together, mm
:iconslyshand:
The colors look well, but one thing I am seeing is the same palate used outside as it is inside the apartment or house or what have you a little brighter or a little darker is the only major difference I am seeing right off the bat.

It is a very good piece especially in comics. That is simply the one aspect that sticks out to me from the get go without thinking too much about it.

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Animation is concentration.
:iconfil:
Beautiful! I can't offer color advice, everything looks de-lish! I'm so excited you're doing a comic!
:iconmeibiseiya:
I agree with slyshand. Same palate. But I think, the sky in the first panel needs some color, to establish time of day. And then you can change the colors of the outside. You can keep the bright colors though, if that's the scheme you're going for. But if the sun is up in the sky, there needs to be some shading.

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"For four-fifths of our history, our planet was populated by pond scum."
"The kraken stirs. And ten billion sushi dinners cry out for vengeance."
:icontuffstuff:
This is it! This is sick! I'd buy it in a heart beat!
:iconsilveraxe:
tarz harika, ikinci panelde kizin poz cok hosuma gitti :)
krit olarak, 'value'larini biraz daha bilincli yerlestirmende fayda var, su anda sanki begendigin renkleri hos buldugun yerlere yerlestirmissin hissi veriyor. Tonlamalarini one cikarmak istedigin objeleri kadrajlayacak sekilde yerlestirirsen cizgiromani okumasi daha da hizlanacaktir.
kompozisyon olarak simdilik gayet iyi gorunuyor. arkaplanda kalan objelerin saturation'ini azaltmakta fayda var, bu sayfada cok goze batan bisey degil gerci de, ilerisi icin soylememis olmiyim dedim :)

gayet iyi gidiyor, merakla bekliorum devamini!

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"Life is what you make of it." -Francesco Carrara
:iconaishado:
Composition is fantastic!
You can try with more contrast to see how it looks, but I think the colors are just great.
I love your style and here, it is perfectly used in a comics frame.
:icondjstayfresh:
i think its the most creative pages ive ever seen! stay with it!

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